Thursday, November 20, 2008

Children of a lesser god


It was a small room in the midst of an inner-city slum. Raju lived with his parents and four sisters.He was the youngest.His father had no source of income.He had lost all his jobs because of his severe drinking problem.Every night he transforms into this drunken monster.His mother, Shanti, works as a house-maid and earns just enough to give them food .She prays every morning. All she asks for is a day without any beating from her callous husband,some food for her children and nothing else.But apparently even this is not acceptable to the God.He shows no mercy.As always.As with every other mother in that slum.But still they all have faith in that absentee landlord.

Raju again had the same dream last night.He was in school learning science. At least it will keep him happy for the day. He works at a small food place near the school. At times when there are no customers, he goes to one of the windows of the school and observes curiously.This has become his routine.He has even made some seating arrangement for himself beside the window with whatever he could find in the trash.He has a strong desire to learn. Whatever he learns during the day, he shares it with his sisters and his mother.He praises the teacher and the fact that he knows so much about everything They all stare at him with bewilderment. He tells them he will become a teacher someday.They all laugh.But some where deep down their hearts they have a strong feeling that he will.His eyes say it all.It is his destiny.

It has been a year now.He still visits that window which opens into a world of facts and knowledge that totally mesmerize him at times. His ever increasing zest for learning is unprecedented.It does not bother him that he has to sit outside the class.But when he looks at those who have the privilege to sit inside, he is confused.They seem to be bored by the words of the teacher.They do every other thing than listening to the teacher. He tells himself maybe they already know it all.He later realizes the truth.The unfair bias.

It was one of those days.Raju got off from work early and rushed to his window.The topic today was 'God' and how he created this wonderful Earth.The teacher told the children that God is fair and treats everyone in the same way and that we all should worship him.He came up with numerous stories to support his statement.It was the first time Raju didn't agree with what he had heard.It just didn't feel right.At the end of the class, students were asked to write a few lines on something which would highlight their perspective of God and present it in the next class.After that, the class was dispersed and all went home.Raju was still there.He went inside the classroom and sat on one of the benches and stared at the word 'God' written on the board.

The next day, when the students entered the classroom they were spell bound.They called their teacher.He stood there in amazement.His eyes partially wet.The board read...

"We are born in the slum. Helpless,weak and dependent.We are forced to be like this till eternity.The attempt to break-free makes it even worse.He wants us to suffer.I can't think of a reason.But we accept it anyway.

You are the fortunate ones.He has given you the power to fulfill your dreams.We can hardly dream.But we accept it anyway.But why are you so heartless? You know you can help.You know you can share. But you don't.Still we accept it anyway.The worse part is that you see us as dirt.Nothing more than that.That is not acceptable to us.

You are God's Children and We, the children of a lesser God."

23 comments:

Priyesh said...

Hey good heart touchin story..

hv a look here also..

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M0XTPSYdP08

Genie said...

Awesome video priyesh, thats precisely the point, the difference in opinions.... we have a million ways to spoil 500 but we cannot see the how important those can be for them......

Anonymous said...

hmmm... good one...

Shirsesh Nath Bhaduri said...

great post....pity posts cannot really help the protagonist/s....

Anonymous said...

very nice, touchy post..& a big truth...keep it up genie!

ranu said...

gr8 one!!....keep up d gud work
Genie starts his magic wen u start readin da post....n d magic doesnt end even wen u hav finished....

Genie said...

@ shirsesh ... you never know man....sometimes small things like this completely change ones perspective .. I believe in Butterfly Effect ;)

@ akanksha, viths n frustmind
:)

Bhasker Rathi said...

good work swapnil...you understand the issue, think a way to change.

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the full blood prince said...

good one yaar!
although apne raju ko likhna kaise aa gaya, that's something to think about! :P
but nonetheless.. concern to hai yeh topic, aur apna hi concern hai. n if anyone can do something bout it, we can. to bas paise kamaao.. jitna ho sake utne paise, if u wanna help them. i cant think of anythng else.

Genie said...

@ bhasker and full blood prince

i agree with prince that earn as much money as possible and help them directly... that's the only thing i can think of right now...but if even few of us do this....it will make a difference..

Genie said...

@ full blood prince

and yeah about Raju learning how to write.... i guess you didn't notice the labels on the post.... FICTION,GOD :P

Greatsays said...

Genie, a great post..

Although i do not agree with the discussion which followed..

Folks.. earning a lot of money and then helping them?? come on, you think our great government does not have money or, our biggest of corporates do not have heart.. Guys there is no dearth of money, but money alone is not sufficient. You know what the real problem is.. It is the waiting we all do... you wait for a job to earn money, people in job wait to get married, then for kids to born, then for kids to get older, then to get retired..etc.etc. the list is endless. If anybody wants to help the underpriviledged, the time is NOW. We all can and it does not always need money.. how many of us have enrolled in "teach india" program of TOI? Go teach them. How many of us have cloths we do not use anymore?? Go distribute them. If we all start helping them in these small ways we can make a difference certainly. So the time is NOW.

Johny-walker said...

Gotta give it to you genie..
excellent.. you read it, and then u close the browser page.. but there is a dent..
its the dent that ur words made. excellent portrayal. keep it up.

Genie said...

@great
yeah i see what you are saying... i guess there is no perfect time to start ....NOW is the time...right !

@ walker
:) thanks man !

soporofic said...

amazing story even motivating also ......... nice creativity keep it up also.

Whats in a name.......... said...

beautifully put. love the last line...

sid said...

Hmm, I liked it very much. ur way of story telling is very gripping

Genie said...

@whats in a name
just the last line ? :P

Whats in a name.......... said...

haha!! read the punctuations genie!!

Genie said...

n u read the ':P' sign :)

Whats in a name.......... said...

i did i did!!had to write something in my defence!!lolzz
btw, am blog rolling you, hope thats ok with ya!

Genie said...

yeah :) as long as the comments go high...fine by me :P